heavy revision to poem from earlier today…
If I were a pure sound
I’d be low hum in the concert hall
before the first note is struck,
sound of
a rung bell
fading;
enough presence
to make myself known
without intruding,
enough uncertainty
that one could argue
for hours if I should be
considered
part of the Music.
If I were pure sound
I’d insinuate, whisper,
murmur. I would
barely be there
simply so I could
stay with you,
right in the ridge of your ear,
a tone
almost unnoticed
behind daily din;
disappearing
at the moment
you fell asleep
as I prayed, sotto voce,
to be permitted to pulse on
in your dreams.
