Two thoughts and a shameless plug:

For the record, I’m up early, not up all night.

1.
I think I’ve finally found a great metaphor/concept for thinking about political poetry and its current discontents. The most recent issue of Writers Chronicle has an article in it (and it’s not close at hand, so I’ll come back with particulars of author and dates later) regarding the state of modern political poetry. (With no recourse to slam issue or poets, either.) In it, the author posits a difference between “strategic” and “tactical” poems.

The former — the strategic poem — is defined as poetry that links the personal with the global, identifying the connections between mundane experiences and larger issues that forge links from the reader’s/listener’s mind and heart to the grander issues of the time, thus creating the possibility for empathy and understanding that may create the desire and action for change.

The latter — the tactical poem — hits specific issues head on, testifying, describing and prescribing action and exhorting change in the reader/listener that may or may not drive to action, but which generally don’t place the reader/listener in the role of anything but witness to the testimony.

Both, obviously, have their place. However, the article points out that as in much of modern activism itself, there’s an imbalance right now in terms of how little strategic thought is being employed in political poetry.

This rings very true to me, and goes along with how my own work seems to be evolving.

2.
My rant and disappointment with the youth slam last night shouldn’t be miscontrued as an attack on youth poetry or poets — in fact, I heard strong individual voices last night, but they seemed so buried in the mold of so much I hear these days that it was hard to discern them.

I don’t hold with those who want to cut such generous breaks to young poets in terms of their style and delivery. There are too many good individual voices out there who start strong, then vanish into the fog of imitation as they grow into the scene.

Every time I hear a poet drop into a gruff, abrupt one -syllable burst in a poem, I can hear Buddy Wakefield’s voice on “Convenience Stores” breaking through. I watch the pseudo DJ hands on kids who’ve watched too many other poets do it — kids who once got up awkward and shy on stage but were still trying to be themselves even as they became imitators.

It happens all the time. Stuffing too many words into three minutes because someone told them a poem’s got to fit between 2:30 and 3:10 — and doing it even when they aren’t slamming.

I volunteered to help with the youth slam team in Worcester last night. It’s hard — I will likely not help anyone win a slam; but I will help them be the best they can be as themselves.

Shameless plug: I’ll be the feature poet this afternoon at the monthly reading at the Brockton Public Library. Open mike starts at 3:30; I’ll be on after that. I plan to get there a little early and check out an art show there. Not a Duende gig, as Faro is playing a wedding this afternoon — solo stuff, a mix of obscure old and brand new. Love to see you there.

Over and out for now…


Stream of consciousness at the slam

War is bad. Sexism
is bad. Racism, homo-
phobia, classism, ageism,
meatism, donutism, boozism,
druggism…

there’s a poem behind this wall
somewhere, a lasting poem
smaller than a roach, big as
fun, charming as hip-hop or
blue suited SHARP, dogged
eared waiting for the next line…

chumpism, snarkism, lift every voice-
ism, jism’s too easy to use here
so it fits perfectly-ism, no more silence
in the face of anything difficultism…

someone has to say it: no more
evidence needed, give us instead word arrow, star finger
pointer, rumbledigger going deeper than
tactical, ditching up strategic faster than
imago can fly…

unitism, we ought to sing alike-ism,
comparisonism…

is anyone an individual anymore? drop
a pop reference like an ID card. let me
show you my space. no different face worth
bothering with…

let it bobism, cunnilinguism, narrowism, buy
your way to godism, growthism, wombism…

Christ, it’s always been so:
everything bad stands up against poetry…so,
fight back: do you know how to fire a poem
that shows me
you?


Listening to the youth slam at the Hut

We’re in the open mike at the moment…

Quick question: does anyone recall the meaning of the following words: metaphor, image, or allusion?

Just asking.

Also, this just in: War is bad. So is sexism.


Gaza

As of right now, the BBC is reporting that Hamas has effectively established control over the entire Gaza Strip.

It’s going to be a long summer.


Attempt

First, the water
was cold, then
so, so warm.

Afterwards, I
sat at the old kitchen table
soaking the carpet — baggage
heavier than ever with the wet
and still tied to my knees.

You offered me a piece of cake.
I shivered even as I took it
and tried to wash it down
with milk, beer, anything
but water.

Mind you don’t
stain things, you said.
I minded because
mind is all I can do.

I think about the cold
and the cake, the water
and the lovely old silt on the bottom
of the sound, the chafing of the ropes
and the things I carry when I walk,
anywhere I walk.

If I could feel instead of think
I’d still be feeling the warm. I’d be feeling it
in my stomach, my arms, in the rush
of it coming inside when I finally let go
and breathed.

Instead, I will take another piece of cake.
I think you’ve got the recipe down at last
but telling you that wouldn’t be me.
Instead, I will stain whatever there is.

Instead. Instead —
there’s a dry, cold world
on this side
of that sound.


Medical woes

It doesn’t remotely compare to what theklute‘s been through, but annoying and upsetting nonetheless.

A couple of years ago I had a fairly serious group of procedures done that involved a double hernia repair, removal of scar tissue from an old knife wound in my lower abdomen, and a few other things.

Since then, I’ve had occasional bouts of abdominal pain, but nothing so regular or debilitating that I did much about it. I chalked it up to age.

I recently learned that the mesh patches used in a lot of hernia surgeries are being recalled for serious failure problems. The symptoms they list are pretty similar to some of what I’ve been experiencing.

So I called to see if I could find out if I received the defective patches, and I learned that my surgeon has closed his practice — and from the tenor of the comments, it was because of malpractice suits. Not sure of that, still researching.

Now I’m trying to get through the red tape to get my records to see if I need the second surgery to remove these fucking things from my gut before they kill me with a perforated bowel.

Life. It’s what happens while you’re trying to live.


Massachusetts comes through

There are times when I hate being here — the dirt, the general unfriendliness, the Byzantine culture that makes it hard to ever feel like you belong…

And then there are other times…like now.

http://news.yahoo.com/s/ap/20070614/ap_on_re_us/gay_marriage


las lloronas

years of watching
nature shows
and I can’t answer this question:

given the opportunity
will a predator
kill two at once?

imagine: somewhere
in central america
a jaguar is striving for a personal best

and prays (in whatever way
that big cats pray) that the kinkajous
fooling about on the forest floor

will stay still long enough
for him to take both with one
velvet razor swipe

but he is thwarted when
one sees him waiting and lets out
a quavering cry

(this is why they call the kinkajou
la llorona
the weeping woman)

and when the two
scratch their way up a tree
leaving the jaguar behind to curse

(in whatever way jaguars curse)
they weep with joy and perhaps
snicker at the loser below

imagine at night that las lloronas
the weeping women
honey bears of the canopy

tell stories to each other
of all the death they’ve avoided
at the jaws and paws of would-be overachievers

pausing now and then to whisper
of the ones who fell alone
and unwarned

there is strength in numbers
they tell each other
the jaguars can only kill us when we forget that

so can a predator
kill more than one at one time?
I expect they can

but only
if the prey
allow


Friends’ List

That time of year…

Just did a massive clean out. Mostly inactive accounts, a few I just don’t read much or enjoy much.

Drop me a line if you’re off and want back on.


GotPoetry.com/Gotpoetry Live

We’re making a concerted effort to push the bar higher for the poems at Gotpoetry.com. If you’re not there or haven’t been for a while, c’mon by and add your voice.

http://www.gotpoetry.com

And tonight at Gotpoetry Live we’ve got Christopher Johnson for a feature. Next week, we’ve got the beat stylings of Sympetalous, and Sylvia Bagaglio kicks in for her feature on June 26th.

Hope to see you there.


Those who forget history…

http://news.yahoo.com/s/afp/20070611/ts_afp/usiraqmilitaryunrest

In case we’ve forgotten, this is how we got Al-Quaeda in the first place.


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At the Hut tonight

A good feature by the Youth Slammers — some refreshingly interesting voices.

If the crowd had been a touch more enthusiastic, or less interested in socializing, or more drawn by the work in the open mike, or…who knows…they might have heard something cool.

It’s sad.

Always hard to assess the balance between rampant disinterest because of sheer ignorance or because of sheer boredom. Not sure what to say here about that — but I do think the passion that some of us have for poetry isn’t much of a factor in that reading anymore.

Poetry readings are just another trendy place to be. How odd, considering that when I was young they were decidedly untrendy. I think that was better in some ways — it was a guarantee of sorts that if you were there, being there mattered to you, and it mattered to you more than being anywhere else.

I’m not sure what else to say. Maybe I’m just an idiot to care that much?


What is it about

“The Deadliest Catch” that is so addictive?


Celia

Celia
on the microphone
you tell everyone your pain
hoping the truth
will set you down and keep you
well footed on the planet

Celia
put that thing back on its stand
and breathe a bit
that immense truth of yours is a mountain
and a mountain could care less
about the intonation
you use
when you describe it

Celia
we can hear it
every hair in your lungs
is a whip driving you
to let it out
but that truth you’ve just got to shout
is just another exhalation
waste pushing itself back to be reborn
once you’ve finished your say

Celia
your words are fingers
and you’re face down
on a massage table
staring into the floor
through a comfortable hole
feeling what they’ve got to tell you
but truth is
those words you’re feeling
will stop in a short time and
someone’s going to demand you pay up

Celia
put away the key
and stop tugging on the shut door
that holds back everything you’ve got inside
the truth is
blood’s thicker than a sentence
dancing tongues step soft and wet where they step
and nothing you have to say
will last longer than it needs to

Celia
truth is no God
poetry no savior
while your voice is a pretty thing
a potent thing for as long as it holds up
you’ve got those whips inside you lying about the cure
you’ve got those whips inside you telling you speech is as good as a leech
what you bleed pools in a cup
and it’s no good once it’s gone cold

Celia
you know what’s true?
your truth is bigger than any poem
your truth demands utterance because that’s the first step
but the microphone only looks like an incense burner
the stand only seems a shadow of the True Cross
your truth spoken is not your chains broken
come down off the stage
give a moment to silence
let the poem be and stop imagining you’re free
just because the whips have slowed
and the cracks have temporarily stopped
when the words are done
you’ve only just begun