Originally posted on 11/09/2012.
Open your story with
shrunken tap dancer,
resting camel,
unstable carousel,
parched fingers, shellfish,
bored gardeners,
a longhouse converted
from dwelling to storage
and filled to the ceiling
with duck feathers.
Where is this happening?
Write in a map
of the small roads
somewhere near Barrington, Rhode Island.
Enter now the central conflict
between a socialite and a meteor.
In a subplot that tap dancer
shall struggle to understand her fate,
her sudden and strange deficiency.
A real woman you love enters the room
shaking her dark hair out from under a hat
after coming in from a storm.
She looks at you staring at the laptop
and says, “Are you done playing?”
Are you done playing?
You set the dancer
on the camel
in the longhouse
before closing the computer lid.
Yes,
you say.
Yes, I am done playing,
though this felt so serious
while you were raising it to life
that the words feel like a betrayal.
You swear to come back to it later
to see if it has continued on its own
and if so, to write in some hope
if the story will have it:
all the threads knit together under a night sky
with the meteor as wish-star
and the miniature dancer stretching her hand
to seize it.

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