The curtains
that fall across the light
when we try to explain to each other
how we put our fingers
on the mercury
in the language
that we use
are damask
and metal-threaded
and heavy
and they block the window
from which enough light
would come in
to make the slippery little domes
shine enough
for us to catch them
We all understand
how the words refuse to be corralled
easily
at our mere command
but cannot explain the methods of the chase
other than to say
it is difficult
and it requires an openness
to seizing them on their terms
as if they had minds of their own
and lives they seek to lead
independently of us
Some will invoke
a muse as the keeper
of their skill at the hunt
and others will speak
of rules and skill and craft
but in the end
we all know
if we let the light in
and scramble enough
we catch
what we need
and those damn curtains
just get in our way

May 16th, 2010 at 12:42 am
I really like this. It sounds like the way I think, with one thought rolling over another, and though they’re discussing basically the same thing, each one has it’s own little universe of intention and autonomy. This poem brings me back to re-read over and again, and that’s always a good thing for me. I love how the first two lines were interrupted and they finish six lines later – brilliant!
May 16th, 2010 at 1:14 am
Thank you. I appreciate your reading and taking the time to comment.