right now no proof
of poetry at all in you
an uncut gem
in your mouth
when you clamp down upon it
it will fire up in there
will shatter into light
but what light
August 5, 2012
Critique
About Tony Brown
right now no proof
of poetry at all in you
an uncut gem
in your mouth
when you clamp down upon it
it will fire up in there
will shatter into light
but what light
Dark Matter 
August 6th, 2012 at 5:23 am
That gem had sparkle!
August 6th, 2012 at 6:07 am
Thank you…more a fragment than a full poem…