so
you think you can dance
you can
you shouldn’t be fooled
into thinking otherwise by
these hardbodies
all air and fire
slow burn turning to flash power
with presence of mind
and uncanny kinesthetics
reminding us all
of those occasional moments
during the best sex of our lives
when the body did exactly
what the body was asked to do
if
you think you can dance
then
you can
think of all the great dancers you know
grandmothers
rotating their wheelchairs
around awkwardly tuxedoed grandsons
at wedding receptions in VFW halls
spontaneous office party freaks
loudly regretting they had that last Jagerbomb
but secretly thrilled at the cheers and screams
busting out like firecrackers around them
construction workers pirouetting
over the piled up prefab sections
of the first new house they’ve worked on in a while
while sorting out which bill they’ll pay first when they get paid
that baby girl shaking her tiny butt to the loudest radio on the block
until big daddy scoops her up and she giggles
and buries her face in his shoulder
while he bounces along to the beat
same baby girl a dozen years later
catching hold of something bigger than the stripper pole
and one tuesday afternoon in a half-empty gentleman’s club
making one man swear off ever seeing another dancer after seeing her
a greasy man doing a driveway oil change
timing the turns of his wrench to some old C&W twang
and only sliding out from under the car satisfied
when the song burps up a pedal steel epiphany
dropout in traffic
on steering wheel drum
hands and hair flying
in heavy metal tarantelle
if you think you can dance
then you can
the only time you can’t
is when you settle into
the can’t
of your couch
and let them convince you
that you’re wrong
there’s nothing wrong with imagining
perfection and admiring
the journey toward it
but if someone with an agenda
about picking your soul’s poorer pockets to make his money
ever clowns you
into telling yourself
that any dancing that is not perfect
is forbidden
get up off the couch
and dance
all shaky heart and floppy fingered
dance
all blisterheeled and trippy toed
dance like someone died and made you
gene
cyd
elvis
shakira
michael
or mikhail
you have always been a dancer
everyone dances
even if just once
all alone
in a bedroom
in front of a mirror
transformed
and deathless
breathless
in motion

June 8th, 2009 at 7:25 am
Thanks for your comments, Donnie.
This poem is a sort of return to an older style for me…my slam period. In slams there’s such an imperative to make points, tie up loose ends, and play on emotion in such a short period of time that you do tend to go for “easy wins” emotionally. I don’t disagree with your sentiments in either comment. Not my usual style, but it works within the genre, I think. Which, I admit, was what I was trying for…wanted to see if I could dust off those muscles, I guess.
As for not getting the blue-collar semtiments — I guess I just write what I know…
Again, thanks for taking the time to read.
June 7th, 2009 at 11:20 pm
The ending could be better as well I think, but I am out of any alternatives one could replace the other with.
June 7th, 2009 at 11:19 pm
There are parts of this that seem like I am not blue-collar enough to get the sentiment, although the sentiment is plainly there to be enjoyed. It may teeter on the saccharine too at times, in excess, but I DON’T think I wasted any part of my life by taking time to read it.