The moment
that freezes the room
is the moment of choice.
The moment
when the weapon appears
is the whole point of having
the weapon at all.
The moment
of using the weapon
is beside the point.
It’s the slowness, the enveloping
freezing of the moment
when the weapon is produced, as it
is seen, reacted to, feared —
as if the moment
was all there was,
no one moving before or since.
You say that’s a fantasy,
the frozen moment, the no-blood
coolness ot the scene.
You say it’s not like that.
You say in fact that
that it sounds like too
many movies, that it only
happens that way in a movie.
Exactly —
at that moment,
the weapon makes a movie
and the hand
on the weapon
is the hand of a star.

March 24th, 2013 at 2:32 pm
wow…this is an amazing poem. the first three stanzas just blew me away, pun unintended but appropriate. i think this is one of the best poems about guns appearing anywhere that i have ever read and i’ve read a lot of poetry.
March 24th, 2013 at 3:27 pm
Thanks very much for your comments…! Much appreciated.