Did a ripple in air or ether
give up some secret just now
when your head was turned
from the rest of the room?
It seems that you are different
than when you last were engaged with us
here at this terribly good party, as if you were now
less one of us than before.
Did something happen? Some hint of
a better existence, or at least
of how empty this one is? Something
for an artist to chase and capture —
you used to paint, didn’t you?

May 10th, 2012 at 4:27 am
It is as if you have been sorting through the skeletons in my closet … telling off some of those secrets.
May 10th, 2012 at 4:25 pm
I hope that’s OK.
May 10th, 2012 at 2:45 am
Really nice…love the last line…sort of took me by surprise and I smiled.
May 10th, 2012 at 2:54 am
Thank you. Just a vignette about that moment of recall of what you were really planning for your life…