I believe
God has evolved
to an understanding
of how little
he in fact
controls — I see
God in Middle Age
relinquishing the historic need
to hold
each of us
too close — I see
chaos descending
for good or
for ill —
a huge Visage
smiles and
whistles
“Que Sera, Sera”

April 24th, 2014 at 9:39 am
Wow, what a statement…I like this a lot. Many “christians” would be horrified, of course, but you hit the nail on the head to my way of thinking. I could see actually MEMORIZING this poem, and I don’t even know my own poems by heart. God “relinquishing the need to hold each of us too close”…wow…Que sera sera…Wow. You got me with this one!
April 24th, 2014 at 6:29 pm
Thanks for all your comments and your close reading of this and other poems…much appreciated.
April 24th, 2014 at 8:10 pm
Any good poem is worth a close reading. You’re welcome, of course! Pam