Test Poem

Test poet, test poem,
test post —

is this thing visible,
audible, there for you?

Am I showing up?
Is there something present?

A small number of words
being sent into the air.  A small man

frantic for impact.  A small poem
typed into a white field on a small screen —

testing this as a connection,
failing in confidence, failing as art

when it’s this desperate, when it matters
too much to me. 

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A poet with a history in slam, lots of publications; my personal poetry and a little bit of daily life and opinions. Read the page called "About..." for the details. View all posts by Tony Brown

7 responses to “Test Poem

  • Abhishek's avatar Abhishek

    The poet always has an advantage. Even his doubts make for beautiful poetry…in fact cocky and confident poets are the ones who are difficult to tolerate. This one does connect, bang on, in one go 🙂

    • Tony Brown's avatar Tony Brown

      Thank you! See my response to Pat’s comment for some background…

      • Abhishek's avatar Abhishek

        “testing this as a connection,
        failing in confidence, failing as art
        when it’s this desperate, when it matters
        too much to me.”
        These lines are no mere technical glitch created thoughts. You are deeper than you let on. In fact I was worrying about your health, reading these lines 🙂

      • Tony Brown's avatar Tony Brown

        Oh, if you’re going to write something, you ought to do it well — even if it IS a test post…

  • Pat's avatar Pat

    Words in the ether
    Read, repeated and absorbed,
    Connect with my mind.

    • Tony Brown's avatar Tony Brown

      Thank you!

      I have to confess — the poem was written because someone was unable to see posts here. She contacted me and we needed to test the solution…so I wrote this, literally, as a “test post.” (We did solve the problem, by the way.)

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