welcome to admitting
you belong under the flag
of scarlet
bone and
vein
unwitting
stamp of pain
for many (leading to comfort
for others on a bed of skins
and feathers)
when you went overseas
that one time
and claimed to be
Canadian to avoid being associated
with the loud couple on the first floor
no one was fooled
and they sneered at you
ah, Americans
best defined
as
impatient
and dedicated to the proposition
that everything
can be found in
either/or
so if you aren’t like them
(demanding the room they desired
and embarrassed by the bidet
they didn’t pay to have that in their room
no sir)
you must not be them
but you are, you are
from your sneakers to your nerves
at the maze of small streets
what if you got lost
and couldn’t speak the language?
(and you couldn’t)
what if you were shown to be
idiots
out of place in the old world?
(and you were, you were)
who wouldn’t be able to tell?
who in the street wouldn’t know at once
that you at last
understood
what it means
not to fit in?
who wouldn’t see
the flag
in your frightened
faces?

December 19th, 2009 at 10:41 am
Your blank verse poem is witty and hits the mark.
Well done!
December 20th, 2009 at 3:36 pm
Was recalling an incident on a trip to Venice some years ago, which inspired this. Thanks!